my book on so coll story similar like twilight tak habes habes ag tulis..
but the thing is i enjoy writting
most of the comments received was ok
but i think im still not up to the standrd
to finish the book i have to have more ideas..
skg tgh ketandusan idea!!
sampai tgk cerita menarik yg best best macam AVATAR baru dapat ilham
sebenarny ade beberapa babak yg menarik nak insert in the draft
tapi bila nak selit kan cerita di tengah tengah tu 'i have tot hink of the starting and the ending of the chapter and so still the story is hangging..
a lot of flaws that were in the book like how washington and DC is like 6000 miles apart so basically i have to have substance on america geography and a good story to apply what they have in the area...
like in washington..
only now i realized after i did a research was that washington was actually full with trees and DC is full with buildings...
so washington is another state in america whilst washington DC is in the DISTRICT OF COLUMBIA
where the president is..
so enlighten me :D
plus i have an intresting story about LUNA MARE :D
tapi tak tau cane nak kait kan
and werewolfs are actually men biten by werewolves, and Lycans are breads of werewolfs
got it twisted yet wait till it ends :D